Do people show the right sportsman ship in competitions? Or do they just like beating people, then rubbing it in their face? I've seen both sides of the story. I am in swimming, a very competitive sport. At the end of each race, either if you win or lose, you always say "good job" to the lanes next to you and you always shake or touch their hand. There are many sore losers in this sport also, if they lose they say nothing to the lanes next to them, and the get out crying or throwing there goggle across the pool. Some people just say to the person next to them "haha I beat you, but good job anyways" that’s not the right way to say you did good, or good job. But what we should look for is if people do sports for the fun and entertainment of it, or just to be rude and rub it in the losers faces. This is the million dollar question.
This is set up very nicely. I like that you ended with a question that would have a reader wondering about the "real" reason why people participate in competitions. One thing I would ask you consider is if you may have included some details that may not have been needed in your hook.
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