Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Zoey Redbird vs. Willy Freeman

Zoey Redbird vs. Willy Freeman
By Andrea Basile

What would you do if you lost your parents and had to grow up too fast?  Zoey Redbird, a vampire who is just 17, takes the responsibility to be a great leader in a harsh world, but inside she is shattered. Willy Freeman, a Native American girl who has found freedom, just lost everything in one terrible night. These two characters from War Comes to Willy Freeman and The House of Night are very similar, and have similar characteristics too.
            Zoey Redbird and Willy Freeman have many things in common. One of those things is they had both lost their parents. Zoey's dad never been apart of her life, and Zoey's mom got brutally murdered by darkness. Willy's mom got captured by the British and later died of sickness. The British also killed Willy’s father by stabbing him with a bayonet. Both these characters have suffered the loss of their parents. Losing their parents affected both of them greatly. Zoey wasn’t very close to her mother but losing her shattered her heart. When big decisions came, she faltered and didn’t know what to do. When it was time for her to be a leader, she couldn’t because she was too fragile. And what hurt her even more was that she didn’t know exactly HOW her mother was killed…all she knew was she got killed by darkness. Willy, on the other hand, was affected by her parent’s death because now she has no “freedom papers” so she has no proof that she’s free of being a slave. Since she has no parents, she needs to grow up and take care of herself from now on. She just doesn’t have anyone anymore. She’s all alone. Zoey has a group of friends to support her, but Willy has no one. She has nowhere to live. No one to hug and love. No one.
 Even though the parents of both these characters died, there’s a twist, a twist that ties these two characters together even more. Zoey doesn’t know exactly how her mother died. And Willy doesn’t know exactly IF her mother is alive somewhere. So they both need to find out the answers, even though what they are going to find might be horrible and terrifying. This shows that they are both brave and courageous. Since Zoey NEEDS to know how her mother died, she is brave because she knows what she’s going to find will be heartbreaking.  And since Willy MUST try to find her mother, she is brave because she knows it will be extremely hard to find her, and there is many dangers of being a girl so she must hide the fact that she’s a girl too. Willy knows she might be caught by the British also. They are both afraid of what's coming but still pushing forward.  They are very similar in characteristics.
            Besides both characters being brave and losing their parents, another reason why they are similar is they need to grow up way too fast. Willy needs to grow up right when she finds out her mother was taken and her father was killed. She needs to nurture herself and provide her own food. She needs to find a new home and she needs to do everything by herself. On page 35 of War Comes to Willy Freeman Willy right away needs to go into hiding from the British, needs to dress up as a boy, and needs to sail all the way to New York with not much food. Willy is only 13! That’s my age! All I need to think about is boys and not gaining weight by eating candy! That shows how much this girl needs to grow up so soon. On the other hand, Zoey needs to grow up in a whole different way. She’s not alone like Willy is. But she got a special and rare piece of magic from their goddess “Nyx”, therefore she is very important in the world of vampires. Zoey is now a Priestess and has to take full leadership and face things that vampires should never face. And even though her mother just died, she needs to remain in control and not break down like a normal person would. That shows how SHE needs to grow up too early.
            Besides all the similarities between these two characters, there are also some differences. The story War comes to Willy Freeman is actually very realistic! The setting is during the Revolutionary War, which is very real. Some of the characters really were people in real life, even though some of the details were made up. It COULD really have happened back in that time. The way the narrator talked was different than The House of Night. Since the setting took place in the early 1700’s, and the main character was Native American, she said a lot of “so’s” instead of “so”, or “because”. On the other hand, the main character in The House of Night talks exactly how this generation would talk today. For example she says “like” and “totally.” Different than War comes to Willy Freeman, The House of Night is fictional. The setting is in a Vampire School. In this world, everyone knows about vampires and there’s darkness everywhere…it has a VERY different setting.
            As you can see, both these characters have many things in common and some differences. They have both lost their parents; they both have a twist about how their moms die, and they are both very, very brave. The only two differences is that Zoey has her friends to help her and Willy has not many people. Also the place and time is very different too. Willy’s story is nonfictional and Zoey’s story is fictional. They have both accepted the fact that their life is hard, and it will continue to be hard. But they are strong and their willing to stick with what they get.

             

Tuesday, December 13, 2011

War Comes to Willy Freeman


War comes to Willy Freeman
By Andrea Basile

Authors Note: This piece is about what the turning point was and the causes and effects of it. I believe the turning point is when Willy’s father goes to the war and bring Willy with him. I would like to know if my ideas are clear.


The main turning point in the captivating book War comes to Willy Freeman, would probably be when Willy’s father goes to war. I believe this because if Willy’s father hadn’t gone to the war, their family would still be together, and nobody would have gotten hurt or separated.
            If Willy’s father wouldn’t have gone to war, everything would have been alright…but of course that wasn’t what happened. Willy’s father going to war caused everything to go wrong. Because he went, that caused Willy to leave her mother alone, and because of that, she got captured. Willy also going with her father caused her to witness his murder. Now that moment will forever be burned in side her memory of her father being killed right in front of her eyes. If Willy never left with her father, she would have at least still stayed with her mom and they probably would have not been taken. Over all, Willy’s father just came to shore at the wrong time. Because if he would have came in just 30 minutes later, he wouldn’t find out about the war till it was too late. The British would have already been gone and everyone in the New London area, would have already been killed.
            As you can see, Willy’s father going to the war in a definite turning point.   Had he not gone, he would have not been killed, the mother would not have been taken, they would all still be together, Willy wouldn’t need to go searching for her mom and for somewhere to live, and it would have still left Willy with 2 parents! In the captivating book War comes to Willy Freeman the point of no return is when Willy’s father goes to the horrific war.

Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Victoria Secret

Victoria Secret
By Andrea Basile

            “But mom! Seriously! Hannah took my bra and ripped it, I need a new one now!”
“Honey stop blaming your sister for everything!”
“Oh my gosh, really? You always take her side, I swear she ripped it!” I yelled.
“Okay,okay I’ll give you 45 dollars but that’s it, alright? No more saying your sister took everything you lost! I’m not driving you so here are the keys and be back by 3:00” she tossed me the car keys, which had a mini shoe attached to them for decoration.
“Its not my fault you never believe me, but thanks.” I walked out the yellow painted door and headed to the car. HAHA my mom fell for it again…well not really she knew Hannah didn’t take it but still, I got her to give me money! I seriously need a new bra, I mean 27 bras won’t cut it! And Victoria secret is perfect for the job. I thought to myself, while pulling out the drive way in my brand new Toyota. “Victoria Secret here I come!”
            20 minutes later I was at Victoria Secret searching for my dream bra. I went towards the back of the store and spotted an old man. He had a hunchback back, a bunch of wrinkles, overalls, and he was looking at red bras. I just ignored him and kept on looking for my bra.then I noticed the old man was now looking at the orange bras. I murmured “that’s it”. I walked over to the old man, and asked “U, sir? Why are you here?”
He turned around slowly and looked like I was asking him where his pants go.
“I am here to buy fruit…I’m out and I need some more.”
I kept myself from laughing “Ummm….I think you got the wrong place…”
“No, no, no I don’t think so, this is an apple you see” he lifted up a red bra. And rubbed it against his cheek, it’s a little soft, but it will still work.
“Uhhh no that’s actually a-“
“And this is a peach” he pulled out a orange bra and rubbed it all over his face “Ahhh I love the feel of fuzzy peaches”
That’s it, I couldn’t help it, I started cracking up.
Then suddenly he started walking towards the panties isle and picked up a large size of bright yellow underwear and held it up to his wrinkled face.
“Huh…so this is where the lemons are!” he sniffs them. “Well these don’t smell like lemons…” I guess he finally realized that I was laughing so he asked “why are you laughing?”
“Your-your”- I was gasping for breath-“you’re in Victoria Secret!” I bent over grabbing my stomach laughing so hard I could barley breath.
“No, no, no you’re wrong I’m in the super market!” he said matter-a-factly.
“No you’re not, that’s at the other side of town! I mean smell this place does it smell like a super market?” I asked.
“Well now that you say that….ohhhhh boy.” The man dropped the underwear and sprinted as fast as he could, which wasn’t very fast, out the door.

Perspective

Perspective
By Andrea Basile
Authors Note: This is about the perspective of the story “War Comes to Willy Freeman” and what the story is in HER perspective and what it would be like if her mother was telling the story. Tell me if I’m clear on my ideas or if I’m repeating anything.
In the captivating book “War Comes to Willy Freeman” Willy is telling the story in her perspective. Now, Willy is a back girl and girls aren’t much appreciated. Woman back in those days were thought as cooks, and to clean and listen to whatever the husband says. Girls were not allowed to go to war. In the first chapters Willy’s father gets murdered, and her mother got captured. Willy dresses up as a boy to go find somewhere else to live. She dresses as a boy so she is not recognized as a girl by the British. In the perspective of Willy she’s terrified and very lonely. She just witnessed her father’s murder, and her only family left, her mother, was taken. Feeling hopeless and sad is what the perspective of this girl. Her only hope now is going to her aunt’s home in Newfield. Now she is a slave without any parents. And since she’s a girl ad hasn’t had any experience in wars or fighting she’s scared too. Since it is in her perspective too she talks like a Native American she says “So’s” and speaks in a different way than white’s people.
            Now that you know the perspective of Willy, imagine what it would be like if it was in the perspective of her mother. From the very beginning it would have been in a different perspective because when the father left to go to the war, she begged him to stay, and she was hurt, unlike Willy who as going with him. And the perspective of Willy v.s her mother is way different because you would have never seen what Willy saw in the war. If it was in her perspective you would her thoughts of her husband and daughter leaving and would see how she got captured and her thoughts about leaving and being lonely. They’re 2 different perspectives but both are amazingly written.

Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Number 2

Number 2
By Andrea Basile

In my dream we were in a meadow. Colorful flowers were everywhere, dew was still on the grass, sparkling, and making it look like a thousand crystals. It was then that I noticed him. The hottest guy in our grade, Chad, was in front of me, looking at me with pure love in his eyes. He gave me a dazzling lopsided smile. Golden hair spilled down his face, his deep crystal blue eyes sparkled. His mouth moved, “I love you.” He whispered, so quietly and soft, I thought I imagined it. Then he slowly leaned in, so gracefully, he closed his eyes, and our lips were about to meet….
“Wake up!” someone said softly. “Common wake up, wake up, wakeup…”
I slowly opened my eyes. “No, I was soooo close!” I moaned. I swept my arm lazily over, grabbed my pillow and shoved in on top of my head. “Go away.” I said to the person trying to wake me up. Go back to sleep, dream about Chad again…you were in a meadow….about to kiss Chad…go to sleep…I was drifting off again, till the voice spoke again.
“Zoey…it’s about your mom”
I bolted up, and saw my aunt Julia sitting on my bed. Her eyes were puffy and red and she looked really, really tired. “What’s going on?” I asked her softly, I was still groggy from sleeping, my eyes felt like they had 100 pounds on them. Aunt Julia lived an hour away what in the world was she doing here? I glanced at my pink clock 4:01am “Are you crazy? It’s four o’clock in the morning!” It was then that aunt Julia snapped. She started to sob. She balled her eyes out and snot went all over my blue and green bed spread. She hugged herself, and her eyes were squeezed shut. I was utterly confused. Then it started to come back to me. Mom went on a business trip 3 days ago…she was supposed to be back today, in the morning. I started to panic.
 “Where’s my mom? What are you doing here? Aunt Julia answer me!” I sat up straight, and softly shook my aunt. 
“S-she got in a c-car a-accident” she spoke between sobs.

To Be Continued…