SNOW WHITE:
· The Evil Queen was jealous of snow white because of her beauty.
· As a solution she planned to kill snow white with a poison apple.
· She changed into a old woman and headed to Snow White’s house
· On her way to deliver the poisoned apple to snow white, the Evil Queen got hungry.
CONCLUSION:
The Evil Queen, fury running through her veins, stormed her way to the “beautiful” Snow Whites home. She carried the basket of red juicy poisonous apples in her tree-woven basket. Running through the woods, passing beautiful landscape, deer’s and rabbits and flowers that haven’t bloomed, a light breeze filling the air, and little birds chirping happily, didn’t even cross her mind. It was like the world was speeding past and all her mind could think about was Snow White taking a bite of that poison filled apple….
Suddenly the urge of something to eat struck the Evil Queen. She stopped in the middle of the woods, her hand on her belly. She slowly looked down at the basket of apples. So yummy, so juicy, so amazing….so hungry. The Evil Queen completely forgot that the apples were poisonous and she reached down, taking a plump apple from the basket. Bringing it up in front of her face, she saw her reflection looking back at her. Putting the apple to her mouth she took a big bite. As if the world was in slow motion, the apple fell from her hand making a soft thump when it hit the ground. She felt her veins filling with poison as her body started shutting down, her last words were murmured from her mouth before she collapsed down on the soft dirt that laid beneath her…”Opps”.
You have good word choice in your descriptions, particularly of the apple. I especially liked the imagery you offered in the Queen seeing her reflection in the apple's skin. Great job!
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